1. It’s important to manage stress because it can affect you physically and mentally – my story about my stress induced uncontrolled hair loss (alopecia) 2. Mental Illness is just as serious as a physical illness and should be treated as such – my life experiences such as friends, psychiatric hospitals and family. 3. Bullying …
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In Class Essay 2 Imitation, 10/8
I have come to believe that mental illness is serious and should be treated as any other physical illness. I am standing here as a person who struggles with 4 mental illnesses. Story – My psychiatric hospital experiences and personal struggles
In Class Writing, Essay 1 Review, 10/8
Had you written a rhetorical analysis before? What aspects of a rhetorical analysis did you learn about that you hadn’t considered before? I had not written a rhetorical analysis before. I learned a lot about rhetorical analysis that I didn’t have the knowledge of before. For example, rhetorical means persuasion so I thought that I …
Grammar Guide, In Class, 10/3
Sentences/Complete sentence/Independent Clauses (a complete sentence: subject, verb and complete thought) Fixing Sentence Fragments You may be missing a subject or missing a verb A dependent clause is a fragment, cannot stand alone Fragment Examples: “Although he wanted to go to the meeting.”, “Whoever goes to the meeting.” Complete Sentences: “Although he wanted to go …
Conclusion Rough Draft, In Class, 10/1
“Skid row is — and long has been — a national disgrace, a grim reminder of man’s ability to turn his back on his fellow man. But these days it is only the ugly epicenter of a staggering homelessness problem that radiates outward for more than 100 miles throughout Los Angeles County and beyond. There …
Essay Rough Draft #2, 9/27/19
Janae Redmond Janelle Spencer Writing 101S September 18th, 2019 Homelessness Crisis The Los Angeles Times Editorial Board, who wrote the article, ‘Los Angeles’ homelessness crisis is a national disgrace” (February 25, 2018), argues that the severe homelessness issue is a pressing nightmare that has affected Los Angeles for years and since the citizens …
Considering Audience In Class Writing, 9/24/19
Who is the intended audience? This editorial is aimed towards people of both sexes who live in Los Angeles, who are old enough to have a job and make good money (middle class &the wealthy), who have a education than high school, Caucasians and African Americans, who have good healthy along with kids and a …
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Essay 1 – Draft #1
Janae Redmond Janelle Levy Writing 101S September 18th, 2019 Strawberry Shortcake American singer/songwriter Melanie Martinez, who released her song “Strawberry Shortcake” (September 7th, 2019), argues that society’s unrealistic body standards cause young women to feel insecure about their bodies which compels them to go to drastic measures to make themselves more appealing. In doing so, …
Introduction Paragraph for Rhetorical Essay, In Class, 9/17/19
American singer/songwriter Melanie Martinez, who released her song “Strawberry Shortcake” (September 7th, 2019), argues that society’s unrealistic body standards cause young woman to feel insecure about their bodies which compels them go to drastic measures to make themselves more appealing. In doing so, they attract men and then are blamed for when they become victims …
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News Analysis, In Class, 9/11
Fox News: “Amazon Fires are not exactly burning “Earth’s lungs’, experts say.” https://www.foxnews.com/science/amazon-fires-are-not-burning-earths-lungs Support for Claims: The claims in this news article are, for the most part, supported by claims instead of evidence. Credible Evidence: I am not sure if the evidence used to support the claims are credible. The writer used an “Scientific American” …
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