How big of an issue is this? This is a very big issue and always has been for years. There are many places around the world that have water and food scarcity and those people are starving. It causes a lot of death, especially children’s since they are the most vulnerable. How do you know …
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In Class Writing Part 2, 11/5
This issue in interested in writing about is food and water security. This affects the whole nation and our future. A potential solution is going vegan? I don’t know I’m not sure yet.
In Class Writing Part 1, 11/5
I personally think that writing essay 2 was more fun and stimulating compared to essay 1. It was something personal therefore it was easy for me to write about it. No one else has had my experience and I’m glad that I had the opportunity talk about it. I had to dive deep into my …
Answers for Questions about Essay #2, In Class Part 1, 10/29
What did you learn about others from your experiences? I learned that others emotions are heavily affected by my emotions sometimes. I learned that people aren’t always doing okay even if they look like it. It’s like the saying, “The people who look the happiest in the room are usually the saddest.” It can be …
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Essay #2 RD 2, 10/24
Janae Redmond Janel Spencer Writing 101S 18 October 2019 The Sickly Hearts and Minds I hate the Mental Hospital. Well, Psychiatric Hospital, but people who’ve been there call it mental because they treat you like your mental. It’s like a jail in a way. The beds are insanely uncomfortable, …
Setting Paragraphs, In Class, 10/23
My current life setting at home is peaceful I guess you could say. My mom is gone on a trip to Barbados to attend her mothers funeral while my brother and I stay here with our dad. Things are always more quiet when shes gone because my brother doesn’t fight my dad. We just got …
Sensory List for 5 Abstract Words, In Class, 10/22
Concept Word: Hunger Looks like = a plate of cold uneaten food on the table Sounds like = angry insides yelling at me so loud I can hear it from the outside Smells like = the slight sent of leftover fast food in a classmates bag Tastes like = the smallest amount of calories you …
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Essay #2 First Rough Draft, 10/18/19
Janae Redmond Janel Spencer Writing 101S 18 October 2019 The Sickly Hearts and Minds Throughout my highschool years, I have been surrounded by people struggling with some sort of mental illness. Actually, a lot of them were/are my close friends. Subconsciously, I’ve always been attracted to people who are …
Essay #2 Outline, In Class, 10/10
Exposition- (intro to the characters and basic information) First paragraph will be about how I was struggling as well as the people around me were. My struggle with bipolar disorder, nightmare disorder, PTSD and social anxiety My friends’ issues (Alyssa, Genesis, Melina?) My family’s issues (older brother – homeless on streets & doing drugs) Conflict- …
Essay #1 Final Draft, 10/9
Janae Redmond Janel Spencer Writing 101S September 18, 2019 Homelessness Crisis The Los Angeles Times Editorial Board, who wrote the article, “Los Angeles’ homelessness crisis is a national disgrace”(February 25, 2018), argues that the severe homelessness issue is a pressing nightmare that has affected Los Angeles for years and since the citizens of …
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